navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » The Near Smile
Open Poetry #36
Post A Reply Post New Topic The Near Smile Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424


0 posted 2005-11-12 01:59 PM


The Near Smile

As though a yearling from the woods,
with dark, round eyes that enter first
the luscious meadow,
you seem to look
wondrously
careful.

RMW

[This message has been edited by RMW (11-13-2005 01:11 AM).]

© Copyright 2005 RMW - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-11-12 02:02 PM


You are a fine observer ~ and that is one of the prime ingredients needed to make a fine poet!

Love & Light,
EA

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2005-11-12 02:26 PM


Bob  I agree with EA....Stop, look and listen....a poets rule.  
RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

3 posted 2005-11-12 03:25 PM


Earth Angel and Martie .... thank you for appreciation. Poetry must be rather like crossing the street. Not sure what that means but it's making me smile. Bob
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2005-11-12 03:44 PM


Bob...maybe it means that you won't get hit by a car?  
tygerChild
New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 1

5 posted 2005-11-12 05:39 PM


How succint a picture you paint with words.

TC

PoetessFlamme
Junior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 20
France
6 posted 2005-11-13 03:55 AM


soft and tender!
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2005-11-13 09:36 AM



Oh, those woods...

they hold many secrets....

and many yearlings...

.

RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

8 posted 2005-11-13 10:31 AM


Martie ... Laughing.  Bob

TC .... Thank you for taking a moment.

Poetess Flame .... Kind words from our friends in France are always appreciated. Thank you.

Sunshine .... No secrets. Just the yearling. Thank you. Bob

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » The Near Smile

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary