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The Near Smile
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Near Smile As though a yearling from the woods, with dark, round eyes that enter first the luscious meadow, you seem to look wondrously careful. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (11-13-2005 01:11 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are a fine observer ~ and that is one of the prime ingredients needed to make a fine poet!  Love & Light, EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob I agree with EA....Stop, look and listen....a poets rule.  |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Earth Angel and Martie .... thank you for appreciation. Poetry must be rather like crossing the street. Not sure what that means but it's making me smile. Bob |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob...maybe it means that you won't get hit by a car? |
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tygerChild New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 1 |
How succint a picture you paint with words. TC |
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PoetessFlamme Junior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 20France |
soft and tender! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, those woods... they hold many secrets.... and many yearlings... . |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie ... Laughing. Bob TC .... Thank you for taking a moment. Poetess Flame .... Kind words from our friends in France are always appreciated. Thank you. Sunshine .... No secrets. Just the yearling. Thank you. Bob |
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