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The Magic of the Bay
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The Magic of the Bay |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 Turning back looking over her sun kissed shoulder for just one more glance at the quiet waters of the bay She could be heard to softly whisper, "I shall return..soon...I promise" Oh, how she always dreaded that final farewell to her favourite summer sanctuary each September- Already she missed the call of the Kingfisher.. The whirring wings of the delicate hummingbirds.. The howl of the wild coyote in the night.. But most of all..she would miss the bay. For the bay held a special magic. It's tranquil waters soothed her troubled mind.. Was it the glorious sunsets ending each perfect day? ...Or perhaps it was the familiar tug of a bass on her line. And in the distance the delighted laughter of the wind-surfers. It was more than ordinary magic..the bay lured her in.. almost hypnotically it held her close in a loving embrace.. softly caressing her wind blown hair, calming her like a giving lover. Leaving her with a feeling of inner peace she had never before known.. Something magical happens out there she has yet been able to explain to anyone.. Perhaps, others must have felt it as well... or had they? Yes, she would remember to bank each and every summer memory. And, in the midst of winter she will again realize there lives within her an invincible summer. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress We all have dreams similar to this, lovely write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Yes, she would remember to bank each and every summer memory. And, in the midst of winter she will again realize there lives within her an invincible summer. well sweet pea, this was enormously beautiful, and the ending, this ending brought tears of joy to my heart...thank you, and know, that I've missed you, don't ever leave and not write for so long again...K? hehe Love ya & thank you for this.... Lee J. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning!! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sounds like you had another wonderful summer by the sea, sister of mine. You know I love this write. hugs!!  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely!!! I'm glad you're back... and thank you for sharing such beauty and peace with us! *S* |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Welcome back and your story of the bay is incredible. Hugs KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Nice Nancy - makes me want to go there - hard to leave such a place -welcome back - Paul |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A poetic gem to be remembered Thank you for the memory Exquisite Liz |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
indeed a stunning write ... beautifully done! I have been too deep in the rat race these days .... the clouds looked like a white dog chasing a black cat that's chasing the bird of paradise to me ... and the bird is almost in my reach! thanks for the smiles you always bring CT A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
It's written as beautifully as it is illustrated. But more than that I closed my eyes and saw it for real. Perfect, as always.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Seymour~This was more than a dream..it was a magical reality! Hugs. Lee~Thank you so much for your so very kind words. I promise next time I go on vacation I will let you know first! Love ya too lady! Dixie Gal~Love ya sweetie..thanks for stopping by and adding the 'stunning'. Your replies mean so much to me. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Chris~Where else is there to spend a summer than by the sea?  Thank you and love ya! suthern gal~It makes my heart feel good to know you're glad I'm back. Thank you for the read and reply. Hugs. Ken~My dear friend, I know you would fall in love with this enchanting place too! Thanks for the welcome back. Hugs. Paul~Yes, it is very hard to leave this wonderful place. Thank you for your reply. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth~I am always so pleased to see you have read one of my humble offerings and enjoyed what I have written. Thank you so much lovely lady. Craig~Your wonderful remarks are always a pleasure to receive and a joy to read. Thank you....Hugs. James~I thank you for the read and reply. Hugs. Larry~Your kind response is so very much appreciated. I'm pleased you could imagine this magical bay. Hugs. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchanting One, thank you soooo much for sharing The Magic of the Bay. I would love to have a summer like that! It has been years since I have had a vacation and my soul yearns for it. I am saving this poem so that I can revisit it whenever my heart cries out for such peace and serenity as you have found in your summer retreat. Your poem and the photo had a calming effect on me as I read your beautifully descriptive and emotive writing. I do so love reading your poetry. Love & Light & a great big hug, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Linda~Thank you sweet lady for your lovely response. This place is not very far from where you live, and I do hope one day you are able to visit and enjoy the calm and serenity it leaves one with. Love ya lady. Hugs. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When it comes to Magic... those who believe, know of its invincibility... just as you have turned a special number on a lock, so have you entered again a realm that only the talented, on their own, can reveal. Thank you for this, Nancy. We all needed a bit of tranquility, and, like magic... you brought it home, again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea~Your grace, charm and heart of gold shine through even in your replies. If only..if only, I could bottle the calm and serenity and send it down south.. But, that would be a feat I cannot perform. Therefore, I will send prayers of hope, courage and love. Thank you for your beautiful reply. Love you... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Pure magic in your words Tinker. I felt like I was there. Wonderfully written and generously shared. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Scorpio~I would gladly share this magical place with you and anyone else. It leaves you with such serene peace. Thank you for always reading and replying. Hugs and love ya! |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
"Something magical happens out there" and I wished I could stay.... The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I do believe there lives within you a neverending summer, NancyLee. This is gorgeous...both the words and that incredible photo! .......jo |
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Waterfall27 Member
since 2005-06-24
Posts 98Ontario , Canada |
lovely write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...I'm sure others feel it....some at your bay, and others at other bays or places that touch them in that wonderous way. You described it so well! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enchantress, We all need a Magical Bay from time to time. I have a few places I often go to, held safe, deep within my mind. Thanks for sharing yours. Amazing how when brought to fore, how the memories can bring peace. Thanks for sharing.... martyjo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Chris~I know you understand and share the same feelings about this magical place. jo~I do believe there lies within each and every one of us a never ending summer....if only in our dreams. Thank you and mega hugs. Christine~Thank you for stopping in and leaving a reply. Hugs Martie~I do hope every one has a special place they can go and find peace and calm. Hugs sweet lady. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
martyjo~I am so pleased to hear you have magical places you can go as well. We all need a place, if only in our mind, where we can go to relax and rejuvenate. Thank you so much for your heartwarming reply. Hugs. |
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