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God saw it was good
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God saw it was good |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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No trick or treat but spiritual sleep calm after emotional storms descended from heaven like manna and God saw it was good to feed the poor, lonely, weak, an overall feeling of peace. The trick is to know and hold it so while life twists the truth into lies and the treat, I believe, a relaxed belief in the strength of pure energy to reach and lift the truth of soul out from the shadows to light. Ah, but not me because I cry and release anguish into the sky and when the rain falls it’s only recall of the very same feel inside. Last night a woman becalmed smiled and snuggled in deep and God saw it was good but she, she, that woman I see, begs now to be released from the more, more, of spiritual chores ignored like dust on the floor. But so it was and will always be whenever the feel inside doesn’t dissipate into the sky and God saw it was good but why, oh, why can’t I? Helen / 8 September 2005 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Helen, I think we all feel this way at some time you have written another thinker  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen "The trick is to know and hold it so while life twists the truth into lies and the treat, I believe, a relaxed belief in the strength of pure energy to reach and lift the truth of soul out from the shadows to light." Me thinks you have answered your own question.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well written Helen...enjoyed the thoughts therein. Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Helen, I always read the words you post and see a bright clear thinking person behind your pen, or keys as it may be. This post is understood. We are all reaching far to try to make sense of this test of our faith.. martyjo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The trick is to know and hold it so while life twists the truth into lies and the treat, I believe, a relaxed belief in the strength of pure energy to reach and lift the truth of soul out from the shadows to light. absolute, and I wave and salute you, excellent prose, simply excellent! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for reading and for your kind comments. I'm tired, I guess, but life still tests and death doesn't rest the soul. |
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