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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You reside there, in your darkness alone in self made seclusion silent far from society in solitary reclusion. Refusing the touch of mankind resigned to living life reposed yesterday remains rejected, painful memories are opposed. If my tears held any power and my heart could break the silence holding your hand then I would walk beside you, with quiet patience Until the place of still was gone until again, you hear life's song. live for today, dream of the future, and learn eternal truths from the past.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"If my tears held any power and my heart could break the silence holding your hand then I would walk beside you, with quiet patience Until the place of still was gone until again, you hear life's song." How tender, yet bittersweet your words Donna. Love ya lady~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
shows your compassionate soul and golden heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A lovely, lovely write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lovely poem |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Your tender heart is showing and I see it cracking slowly bit by bit. A lovely, caring piece. martyjo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna So lovingly written!  |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Wow! Strong writn & it reminds me of a friend, which is what writing is suppose to do, make the read recognize. Like passing said shows the you! |
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