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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Exodus Roger Williams hit those keys then music strangled me; I trembled vibrating at simplicity’s note and the escape of a long ago multitude… Decades passed, blonde and freckles gave way to now, here, again, it could be any, but this given day, a Sunday…a day of rest it returns, randomly, jetting its strong main, purposely coursing my blood, again… and all in the tempest, flooding this soul. It begs a question, where next, Lord, do my knees rest to pray? "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-05-2005 05:49 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....I feel the surge of passion in this....too hard to hold it is so big. As for prayer, any where, even not on your knees, when your heart is there.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Anywhere ... anywhere at all is just fine with Him~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"Decades passed, blonde and freckles gave way to now, here, again, it could be any, but this given day, a Sunday…a day of rest" loved this, all of it |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
So deep and lovely. I enjoyed this exodus into your soul! This should have more replies! Go up!  Very good write, dearest! Love's a lovely lad |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Captivating. A pleasure to read and mentally digest. "If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Being spiritual rather than religious, I generally don't pray. But even I've been saying an awful lot of prayers this past week. A pleasure to read you again Karilea You can never win or lose |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You can rest those knees anywhere, Karilea. God will hear you wherever you are. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God can hear what is in our hearts when we are unable to pray... Linda |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
The earth will see these knees once more.... well done sis |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Have to go along with Marge, SIL.....anywhere....anytime....anyhow. Being on your knees is a state of mind. Library clicked. ....jo |
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SoundWaves Member
since 2005-06-22
Posts 113Center Stage |
Great write Sunshine!!! The spotlight can only get brighter. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Roger Williams....member of my church, and sometimes we get a very pleasant surprise on Sunday morning..... For reasons that are personal to me, this response....making it at all tonight....required a certain level of prayer. I'm glad there was such a poem as this, to help me. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Decades passed, blonde and freckles gave way to now, here, again, it could be any, but this given day, a Sunday…a day of rest Great Job!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It doesn't take a box, whether of wood or metal or glass......doesn't even take knees....as you know.... That guy's music is something beyond... Has to be pushing eighty by now, but when he sits at that keyboard, he's twenty-five....and his music is timeless. Interesting place, that church -- the one on TV....it could seat the whole congregation of my first church on the front row (back row, more likely -- we were Methodists)....all that metal, all that glass, but somehow you don't feel small when you enter, you feel a bit larger than you were out in the parking lot. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Where next? Is such a wonderful contemplation. It warms me and thrills me, so thank you for writing this. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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