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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-09-02 12:28 PM


A break in the song
Being sung

By chance
A glance
Between lines

The step nondescript
In the right direction

For a moment
You’re there
And then
Not
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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
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1 posted 2005-09-02 08:22 PM

I can't definitively say why, but I like this, much.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-09-02 08:26 PM

I like it too
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-26 05:07 PM

can't sleep during a concert.

I am quite amused by your poems in the way that I interpreted...
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I love every poems of yours. long or short or other. all beautiful.. can't pick out for basket. Have to leave them in the field.
thank you for all your kindly sharing.
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