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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-09-02 01:53 AM



A wooden bucket
By the well
A monarch butterfly
Fans its wings

In green shadows
A rubber ball
The chain link fence
A pair of swings

From deep woods
A robin’s song
The small blue lake
A water tower—

On gravel stones
The sound of tires—

Northern lights
An amber moon



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-09-02 02:09 AM


what pleasant scenery you've sent tonight
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
2 posted 2005-09-02 04:41 AM


Yes, I can picture this.  Seems like a good place to be.
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-26 06:00 PM


absolute
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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4 posted 2007-04-26 06:13 PM


your 360 vision one night. what a beautiful poem. I googled image of "northernlight and moon" there are may stunning pictures.

very beautiful for read, vision, ear and a clean soul.

a beauty.

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