Open Poetry #36 |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Reading a book Late at night Sound of cannon |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Your poems have great impact... The sound of a cannon blast, breaking concentration...perhaps not audible, perhaps a vibration of thought, instead of a physical cannon sound....streaming from the image constructed in the mind, from words read.. This happens to me when I read good poetry that sounds out loud, enlightenment, Or a lesson unheeded from history. -------------ice ><> |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like that one. Very much. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
read a better book before sleep. |
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