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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-08-29 10:20 AM



The clock
Chimes eight bells

Orion
In meditation
Above the trees

It is not I
Who brings me out on this balcony
To witness a shooting star
Briefly streak across the sky

Someone whose name I do not know
Gazes upon the night

What has self to do with this
This kinship with the universe apart from time

Come my best friend
It’s not too late
And the air is cool

Stay as long as you can
These hours are yours

Teach me
Not to be a fool

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-08-29 05:03 PM


One of your best in my opinion.

Truly beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 2005-09-01 04:05 PM


Can I find such lessons?

Wonderful write!!

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-26 06:15 PM


wait for this angel all my life.

each of your poem is a pearl.

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