Open Poetry #36 |
Unrequited |
evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
A lifelong love kept in his heart And she knew she was always part Of something special but forbidden Love for him, always hidden For she had made another life Became a mother and a wife And he, too, took himself a mate To pass the years of the wait And in those years of misery He lived his life so carelessly Smoking, drugs and alcohol Finally took a heavy toll Now he lies, for death, awaiting Life, no longer captivating His body’s tired and broken down No need for him to stay around In she slips on quiet feet Watching him in restless sleep A gentle kiss upon his cheek With labored breath he tries to speak “Tell me what you never would That in your heart I always stood And that you love me to this day So I can finally go my way” A gentle whisper in his ear “I do love you and hold you dear For you were always in my heart Never were we far apart” He smiled that smile she’s always known And started on his journey home She stayed there watching every breath Till there was none – only death. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
in a perfect world.... Always enjoy your offerings. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This spoke volumes.. good write.martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd Mike you are so good |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
talk about choices huh, but in the same, you gotta admire them both, for staying true to their choices...and not moving on impulse. Great story, I liked! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So heartfelt and touching Hope |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
This is a beautiful piece, in both sentiment and in the way you sculpt the words. I much appreciate the read. It's only a tragedy after we bleed. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Perhaps a true reflection of life that leads into and leaves the reader somewhat emotional. Good write! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a very sad write... |
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