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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2005-10-28 04:25 AM

To find solace in your embrace,
whether tears or smiles are upon your face.
With you by my side I can walk with my head held high,
I can be sanguine.

And if ever I reached nadir in this life,
I know that you would be there to ward away the imprecation.
You love with probity,
and forever each moment you are genuine.

My heart is friable,
but with you it is wide open and protected.
When I fail, you guide me,
just as a mother should.

Its nice to that you aren't hoary,
because the times have changed.
I don't want to be known as a wastrel,
and with you I can find an abundance of love.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

1 posted 2005-10-28 04:58 AM

beautifully written

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2005-10-28 08:43 AM

enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2005-10-28 11:04 AM

Uh Kellie,
A question about this:

My heart is friable,
but with you it is wide open and protected.
When I fail, you guide me,
just as a mother should.

Does that involve a frying pan?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-10-28 11:14 AM

Very nicely penned Kellie...much enjoyed the sentiments here.
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-10-28 03:07 PM

Kellie~
This is WONDERFUL !
Right up my alley, gal~

You're courting a mighty muse ... keep on~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

6 posted 2005-10-28 03:22 PM

um... is my dictionary mistaken? My dictionary said Friable means easily crumbled or pulverized.....

I decided that I was well lacking in the vocabulary department, so I went and got a list of words off of a Vocabulary word generator, and well now I have lots and lots of new words to expand my vocabulary with, and Im hoping that I am using them all in the proper contexts, and If Im not I hope someone would point that out to me...

Thank You all for the sweet comments, much enjoyed.

And yes this muse is on a streak of luck right now... I hope it lasts to all eternity too.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2005-10-28 04:16 PM

Kellie,
It was a yoke!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

8 posted 2005-10-28 04:24 PM

such a sweet write, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

9 posted 2005-10-28 07:16 PM

Yes, well Larry, I've never heard of someone yoke a in a conversation.. lol but it was a good joke lol

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