Open Poetry #36 |
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Eyelash Envy |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania ![]() |
A dead one lies on an epitaph- etched table. It belongs to you- fat and black an unwelcome cat. It would be welcome to come to my eye and blink in sync with an army of cats. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I wish I could understand this Bodger |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Hi, I've never read you before, and am really loving this! It would be welcome to come to my eye and blink in sync with an army of cats. Affectionate and clever entwined, love it! Putting it in my library. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Bodger, Your wish is granted. This poem is a simple one that I wrote for my fiancee. He is from El Salvador and has the most beautiful, thick eyelashes you could ever imagine. I always tell him that I would do anything to have his eyelashes (lol). So one day while we were sitting at work I spotted one of his eyelashes on the table and since I am obsessed with eyelashes (this is the second one out of three that I wrote on the subject) the idea for this poem just kind of hit me over the head. That's all it's about. gemjop, Thank you so much. That's very sweet of you. I haven't been around in a while but hopefully will be around more now. I don't think anyone's ever told me they were adding me to their library. Thanks so much. |
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