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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-08-28 05:09 PM

Night lifts the separation,
the echoing green melts
within the sky it builds a fence upon,
and trees become dreamers,
shadows fading within
the twilight sleep,
the sky is a parasol;
a stream of ink
washing all into black heaven,
and you begin again,
the dreamlover,
your blue eyes penetrating
the veil of midnight,
you lift me up
and pull me towards you.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2005-08-28 06:23 PM

Dear Michele, I love your twilight sleep!

You render the charm of midnight dreams superbly.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-08-28 06:51 PM

Bringing nice thoughts to me...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-08-28 07:49 PM

beautiful!!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2005-08-28 10:09 PM

This is why I prefer the night, so romantic..love this

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2005-08-28 10:33 PM

...trees become dreamers,
shadows fading within
the twilight sleep

I absolutely love these lines.
Great job as always.

http://www.mysticwicks.com
(try the after dark section)

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2005-08-30 06:00 PM

enticing

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2005-09-02 12:24 PM

oh but your daydreams are so lovely
rather nightdreams . . .

I saw that sky, you built a life up there.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2005-11-23 11:35 AM

mishy, when you write like this, i can almost remember l#ve..almost, mostly i just remember the dirty bits(too few)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-11-23 12:42 PM

thanks for bringing this up raffi, and yea keep an eye open for it.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2005-11-25 07:19 AM

..."trees become dreamers"...

So very creative Michelle.
A sensual feast for the reader, or the dreamer.

Happy Thanksgiving.
TD

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2005-12-08 11:47 PM

the echoing green melts
within the sky it builds a fence upon,
and trees become dreamers

you... how do you do it? keeping this.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2005-12-08 11:56 PM

One to close my ideas and fade into to sleep on!!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

13 posted 2005-12-09 11:07 AM

What perfect moments! Beautiful.

- Owl

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2005-12-09 12:14 PM

Glad Gemma brought this back up...

'cause I missed it and it shouldn't be missed!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

15 posted 2005-12-09 01:15 PM

*sigh* stunningly romantic....I love it...**big Hugs**

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