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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2005-12-09 05:20 AM


Sylvan scenes silently swept
into my minds eye.
In the woods in a valley,
frost, filled filligree sleeping
trees with ice lacework.
Catching breath at raw
glacial draughts of air.
Gestures of sorrow exclaimed
on his face,as he thought
of the wounds he must heal.
Fleeting flames warmed him,
warm drink soothed him,
within the bliss of his solitary shack.
He wished for wild wind to
fill the belows of her heart.
For riotous blooms of flowers
sweet scented, fields of love
in blazing carmine richness,
for a precious hearts ache.
Staring at dancing flames
kindled above glowing embers,
sparks rising high up above into
a new evening of stars,
he wished midnight
fire sparks would carry
dreams to her sleeping silently.
As foxes slipped by easily
in the cold frosted night,
lifelong celebrations of love
glowed from him, for her
and the entire world complete.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-12-09 07:21 AM


In the woods in a valley,
frost, filled filligree sleeping
trees with ice lacework.
Catching breath at raw
glacial draughts of air.


my morning view

what a berautiful write, Phil


M

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-12-09 08:50 AM


soothing words, comforting, makes me want to lay back and listen to some beautiful music,maybe some John Barry...
of course I love the part about the foxes!


~ARH

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-12-09 11:08 AM


You could ignite many a comforting fire with such glowing poetry! Gosh, yer good!

Love & Light,
Linda

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
4 posted 2005-12-09 01:20 PM


Visions of dreamscape brought to life in a way that warms the heart....Absolutely beautiful....**big hugs**
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