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Lunatic's souvenirs
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Lunatic's souvenirs |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The shortest distance between solace and me routes a course of plastic cast divinity, no pause in the waking, need prejustified, little matters little of cost and the like, always requesting Peter remedy Mary and Paul, all is always naught and matters not at all When in the end it’s all spent on a lunatic's souvenirs and the shortest distance between solace and me is further than it appears |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
no pause in the waking, need prejustified, little matters little of cost and the like, Melts in your mouth not in your hands, the divnity I mean. But finding solace is a very personal souvenir, and something we can hold on to. You're such a wonderful poet, ya goob!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When in the end it’s all spent on a lunatic's souvenirs ~*~ I'm just glad you woke up long enough to write! Welcome home, puppy! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I could never figure it out .... people I know that don't smoke with all those novelty ashtrays! ... a golfer putting, a swimming pool with a diving board, ... an oasis with palm trees and dancing girl .. ???? ... well thisis most definitely a souvenir!!! nice to read you ... CT |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Now this is the perfect way to wake up! Solace is over rated the way it comes and goes is just a tease!  I have missed your writing...always gives me something to ponder. Love ya madly Dunc!  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well written words...enjoyed |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ahhh, Good! Duncan words! Happy to see them Glad to have read them Well said, m'friend |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm happy that you stopped puffing those magic dragons long enough to pop into pip for a pit stop! lol Good to read you again, ya dunkin' lunatic!  Hope ya stick around, stranger! Big, warm, welcome-back hug, Linda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Missed you, today you served excellence on a tray. Tasted good. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I want to thank each of you more than I can really say. And a special nod to a certain dear witch who in her own sweet, fruit loopy way, inspires many.  It's good to be back on the porch...  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My my my, I feel like it's Christmas... thank you my sweet, sweet, buddy! lunatic's souvenirs...as I glance around my room, methinks you may well be a remote viewer, too. Come to think of it, two years ago, just before Christmas, a puppy showed up on my porch. I didn't let that one go either. Love you! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well this was awesome, and the fruit loop is dancing a dance of "Gleeeeee" as we speak! She has got the ball rolling again I think, and even I shall give it a shot for the sake of a witch in distress. Anyone seen that darn muse? Loved this Dunc, and great to read ya again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dunc, Had to pop in before I run and say how good it is to see you here. And ditto the Bluesy girl. BluesSerenade, How I miss you so. Email me some time, ya' goob. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hey lunatic, YOU are the souvenir |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
DUNCAN!!! You big ole sweet porch puppy!! I sure am glad to see you, too. You know, you sure are a good poet, sir!! I've missed seeing you around. Hugs, Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and yep, I's making rounds again, when I can read slower, for full appreciation. And Dunc? I'll be damned, but yanno what came to mind with this? "I don't care if it rains or freezes long as I have my plastic Jesus ridin' on the dashboard of my car... I'll go ninety miles an hour long as I have that plastic power ridin' on the dashboard of my car...ar." I'd credit the author, but at the present time it's beyond me. Just know that I have habit of belting that out without warning, much to the annoyance of anyone in hearing distance. But hey? It makes 'em put some music on. (We should sing duet some time.) The gig's up m'porch puppy--the rhyme, yanno? It's time to write a minuet, por moi. *laughing* *hugs* Don't be a stranger, or I'll have to come singing AT you.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The shortest distance between solace and me routes a course of plastic cast divinity, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ always requesting Peter remedy Mary and Paul, all is always naught and matters not at all When in the end it’s all spent on a lunatic's souvenirs and the shortest distance between solace and me is further than it appears ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ well well..... yaya very clever word play here Dunc... loved the symbolism ya used to ask the questions and create/define the conflict...and its interesing how much intellectual depth you could cover while maintaining your signature succinctity. I could have saved ya all the poetic pondering though? ... the shortest distance to solace? tis the fastest route to the creek. yaya or maybe the coffee pot. yayayaI'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 good to see these words here....glad you have come home, now stay awhile will ya? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
"further than it appears" smile nice ditty Duncan enjoyed |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I was wondering when I would read you again If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-26-2005 11:45 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the second time around, Dunc, for some reason I was seeing a giant plastic credit card dancing on the screen....rotflmao... the distance between me and solace? lol (jiminy has been known to have 'off' days) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"When in the end it’s all spent on a lunatic's souvenirs and the shortest distance between solace and me is further than it appears" Actually, I have to go along with Midnitesun's comment about the credit card...lol Liked this a lot!  ....jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Because it just seems like that kind of a day... and because I do remember Duncan... Just needed to look more slowly."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
When in the end it’s all spent on a lunatic's souvenirs Just love those lines... very clever. Good to read you. |
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