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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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you do not love me like you love pushing buttons on my chest, keeping my heart in a constant state of quick motion.. you will not notice i've been crying, for i keep my tears well kept deeply inching within me like tiny daggers.. time picks at the wounds so irritatingly and i itch for just a few words to make me warm... for i cannot sleep without the calm scar pulsating within me it will always be there desperately beating and i will not comfort it.. i will never forget that you do not love me.. as i love you.. the first to leave a true scar upon my heart.. this is such a miserable ghost.. and i will allow myself to be forsaken. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
... first scars are tough ones, they survive most everything ... this is very deep, and the most healing words, and most honest ... ... we believe in you! always CT |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and yet another time I do believe you have channeled my exact thoughts and feelings, Meg. this is such a miserable ghost.. Yes, it sure is and the sad thing? They don't see through that thin veil as we do and THAT is what makes it so hard. Beautiful writing, missy Hug that baby. She loves you, as do we. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I think the first scars are the most painful and I for one, even though I am 50 now, have not forgotten my first scars and who put them there....You speak from the heart...I hope healing will come soon...*big hugs* |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and i will allow myself to be forsaken" we all forsake ourselves at least once, it's how we learn.  as always the way you write it moves me.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Very deep Bodger |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
these words could of only come from a person who has experienced what was written. powerful. "If this grand panaorama before me is what you call God... then God is not dead." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This...sigh recognition is the hardest part. Sometimes we don't get what we want or need from others, not because they are stingy of the heart--sometimes they just don't have it to give. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is so heartwrenching. You definitely express what the heart feels, Kaoru. ....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
these people can actually strip one of their soak, sucking the life out...yanno extemely heart wrenching...dear one... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oh god, you have an ability to take me right back to my own moments and relive them. Some people can do their worst to you and never make a mark. Then that, special someone, (ha!) comes along, and they just seem to know exactly what to. into my library again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"you do not love me like you love pushing buttons on my chest, keeping my heart in a constant state of quick motion.." ~ Your turns of phrase are always unique and memorable... EA |
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