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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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tulip-like spring flowered and bulbous your lips form its slender stem corner-creased toward your chin oil-painted and desirous ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
yesssssssssssss a bud light bottle for sure (grin) kewls stuff darky |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you're the morning kiss i've been waiting for. glad i stopped by  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Good morning, Eve. I see that after you have clothed yourself in the leaves, you decided to eat the fig as well. MMMmmmmmmm Juicy!   |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
like the dew of dawn perspiring on a tip of red rose petal, burgundy I take you in my palm ever so gently basking in the sun and all of her glory. __________________________________ That was beautiful Maree. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and you...the artist with a pen that paints dreamscapes on blue canvas. very cool vignette poetess Maree. Im not asking for a moment, all I want is time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lips turn toward heaven suckling essence from stem of life~ oh my little gypsy queen, now this is divine.. I like this M. very much...yesterday is gone tomorrow doesn't exist |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Your words are suculant!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maree........yes, it is! Enjoyed this! ....jo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah...the essence of this poem quenches more than thirst...Bravo!!! Well done...*big hugs* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
delicious! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
DS, thanks for the 'kewls' m'freind. Ms Ink, thank you *smile* I'm glad you stopped by as well. M'lady...Eve? then you must be my evil twin Lilith mmuuahhhahahah or am I both, or are WE both, and why should i stop at the fig? You said yourself it's 'Juicy'. winkies' Thank you Gorgeous. Suzie, what a lovely response..thank you Ms Janet Marie.... "and you...the artist with a pen that paints dreamscapes on blue canvas". Oh how i wish. I thank you My Gentle One, "Lips turn toward heaven suckling essence from stem of life~" Beautiful Bella. Thank you muchly. Martie, I don't know what to say...i thank you Honeysuckle Jo, so happy that you enjoyed, i thank you. Vandana, thanks. PS, glad you enjoyed, thank you. Startime, thanks for the bravo ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yummmm - and now you put a whole new picture in my mind of Juicy Fruit winking at you and K.Nicely done Aussie. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Ms Sharon, thank you.... you may call me Aussie if you wish, just don't call me Sheila lol mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This is so concise, so edible! I want to eat it! Does that make sense? The reds and yellows, the curves of tulips and profiles of faces, the bold definition. This is so clever. your lips form its slender stem corner-creased toward your chin oil-painted Library. xx |
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