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Open Poetry #36

eagles of columba

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-08-29 07:41 AM

I typed your name with my mind
with fingerless perfection
like a poem dreamed

as a something I would never find
but the list is shorter each time
as I write down the wishes

and it gets longer too it seems
like the waiting to get there
when on a child's chair journey

and I wonder if some morrow dawn
will your name be all that remains
and will I find myself at your door

with some friendly flowers and life time
_______________
dark

scribnote: eagles of columba are doves..and her name is peace

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-29-2005 09:06 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-29 08:02 AM

some would say, that this comment is trivial, but it's all I have this morning D?
beautiful...absolutely beautiful

Good morning

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2005-08-29 08:23 AM

I am intrigued by your poem, it is touching in its thoughts and very beautifully expressed.

If this is reality, maybe these words will lead you to take the necessary decisions to anticipate that particular dawn.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-08-29 08:36 AM

and I wonder if some morrow dawn
will your name be all that remains

~*~

At least, one would have memory
of a name...

Soft, DS...thank you.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2005-08-29 09:08 AM

touching...

I can see you there.

K

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-08-29 03:47 PM

For peace
Try a whisper
it works every time,
it blows the hallow in to an empty mine
and kisses something holy and cool,
as a tomb in a mountainside
or a fan within a room.

Your poem touched me very much, DS!

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