Open Poetry #36 |
They Are Gone...but held gently |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
They Are Gone it has been said he left, as did she and they might have taken a slight sabbatical for a little while but they left their soft smiles I know because I've been to the archives which can, in itself, this word "archive" be a lovely word or a dank word depending on what is in its hold and what it is holding but these archives are delicious and nutritious and sustaining of all that I seek their smiles…and everything else they left behind so do not chide me nor deride me for the time I spend in here, letting it all sink in again and again their words of passion of heartbreak and surcease, of love and light of misery and hope of misguided thoughts and wars well won and wars duly lost of spirits and spiritual love of planes and substances untouchable but all of which are left readable their words sustain my soul and the tiniest, most miniscule thoughts were planted in my brain because of their words which someone did not leave unheard but rather, read and enjoyed, even if only by One… that One person captured a piece of the writer, the poet, the author that One person went away or stayed because of that writer, poet, author and forevermore shall remember or if not actually remember, still, will have been touched, just once by the Passion of the Person, Poet, Painter of Promise. so on this very holy day a day of rest a morning come early with soft electrical candle's light and if fortunate, then on into the night I shall visit and reacquaint myself with friends who are on sabbatical, but visit them I shall in the archives. ~*~ A repost "There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've been spending a bit of time in the archives myself, lately. I don't often give a response there, but I read there...as much as I read in Open. You're right, it gives a feel for what is past, but not passed. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
yes~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunshine, this is so true. I like to read in there. Like Ed, I rarely post there, but maybe I should...... we never know when someone who has gone may come back to visit in the archives. Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I've just been in there myself, moreso than in here lately, looking at us all running around here giggling. It made me smile, as did this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
it is a lovely place to pause a bit, thanks for the reminder so much to go back to that i either missed or never caught the first time around. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I, too, have taken a few trips into the Archives, just to feel the presence of a few friends I have met here, and miss...they may be gone, but their words and thoughts live on forever for those of us who want to remember...wonderful write, my Sun-sis...~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Kari.. There is no other way to hold them, But gently in the hands of our hearts.. Love is this poem ------------ice ><> |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
lovely as always The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
by the Passion of the Person, Poet, Painter ~~ all of which you are.....this is lovely Karilea~ and a beautiful reminder! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nicely done Karilea, I'm glad it's back as I missed it before. Wasn't at all what I expected but pleased me just as much. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautifully expressed....the archives are a treasure, I only wish I had more time to explore them.....sigh |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm always amazed at the treasures I find in the archives... visiting old favorites, finding words to relish I'd missed first time around. *S* Beautiful write... and reminder! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I just love the archives myself, though I haven't frequented them lately this is the nudge I needed |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I am so glad there is an archive. I have been going there alot lately. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It is true, and I am so grateful there is this treasury available to us. luv ya, SIL.....jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yes, sissie....held gently! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Such fond memories are held there..... yes, a beautiful place to visit momma k. yesterday is gone |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perhaps a blessing clothed in words we feel the same way of you dear poetess |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
They did not die they merely slept There words echo As if a different person wrote at that time Claiming thoughts they felt were thine To illuminate in colours bold Or sensitive in growing old Words we want to forget Yes learn the were best and we regret We ran away from thoughts and words and deeds That told the world Of our needs Bodger |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
of heartbreak and surcease, of love and light of misery and hope of misguided thoughts and wars well won and wars duly lost of spirits and spiritual love of planes and substances untouchable but all of which are left readable ~ A feeling of melancholy while writing? The verse above was my favorite. this was and enjoyabel... I'll call it tribute, to read. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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