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Open Poetry #36
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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2005-08-24 04:26 PM

These walls are coming down,
built upon a jagged thorn of deception.
Where is tranquility,
im here wading in pain.
The tears that fall are fading now,
and I'm lost but nearing you.

Knocked to the ground, sudden jolts of fear.
leaving me here.......


(to finish this would defeat the purpose sorry guys)
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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-08-24 05:50 PM

Then it is finished and needs no apology or supposed interrupt. Good write Kel.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-08-24 05:52 PM

understood
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