Open Poetry #36 |
Lay Your Hands (repost w/ pic) |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
upon the still of empty nights astride empty thoughts wishing of stars ... visions to life where each can feel such burning desires becoming real lay your hands against all will my endless plights their immortal thoughts expectating ... stop mindless strife as bodies heal in touching the soul stimulating ... lay your hands ** ~ ** A word in hand is worth two in a hush ... CTOwen/05 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You made my heart vibrate in joy with these beautiful lines and that touching picture. Love, Margherita |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
this melts my heart..lovely If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you for a memory. I can remember when my son took that very picture when each of his daughter's were born, and I love to still see them holding hands. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Life is full of changes but always a beginning and an end .... the picture spoke volumes to me, I just filled in the blanks Thanks for the read and replies! CT |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent! This picture is poetry of it's own, and the blanks you fill shower endlessly of their own accord. Wonderful write. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sweet little hands touch the poet's world of words |
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