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The Mountain or the Ground?
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The Mountain or the Ground? |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Which to love more, The tickling of mountain stream, Or, the spongy cushion of the grass? The freedom she gives my soul A comfort zone, a place to laugh? The independence of walking Though, supported by earthen sponge? The other, the adventure of rock climbing To heights I’ve never hung Which to love more? The mountain or the ground? Not one love, but two my steps have found… |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
YES!  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! This poem is Brilliant...*hugs* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Magnificent!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Well, now that I've climbed a mountain that grounded me?  loved the thoughts in this write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is really good.  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Enjoyed Gloom |
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