Open Poetry #36 |
Dark Sails |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
on any blistering day time would appear fleeting lost to endless horizons and sunrises bleeding where song was once in the wind now am feeling dispair and in the need of release taken to healing air searching for the darkened night and into calmer seas to reach the stars of heaven under empty sails ease fleeting dispairing seas "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
||
© Copyright 2005 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved | |||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmm...why is this ALL the way down herE without any rEpliEs? hmmm.. I reckon I could do that for a once-upon-a-time-friEnd |
||
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Very well written Bodger |
||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this very much |
||
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely, thank you for the journey, and the beautiful visuals...one we should all understand, is just a fleeting park of life...perhaps a gift within the gift, for if we were able to understand, the bad isn't really always so terrible, we'd grow much faster spiritually... Hugs |
||
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
to endlEss horizons...always In your light I learn how to love |
||
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... ty Lauren, nice to know I have someone to look forward to! ty you everyone for your replies ... |
||
BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
Enjoyed the journey, thank you. |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed the read... Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
||
StarryEyed3 Member
since 2005-06-26
Posts 58bostonia |
thanks for sharing... very powerful "and i'll sit and wonder of every love that could have been |
||
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really liked this one a bunch. |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
||
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very much enjoyed this Craig. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |