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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
she calmed whisper soft barely there touch hushed between shadows a hiding place for tiers and you shared fingertips explored defences after tearing them down for eyes crave the roar before mortar sets blocking sun his kiss arrived gift wrapped in salty drops that fell on her tongue bitter-sweet and slow tomorrow more storms due... ~tier  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
returning a much needed gaze...well done... enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like these storms of yours... wow! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tiersdin Enjoyed the read. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"his kiss arrived gift wrapped in salty drops that fell on her tongue bitter-sweet and slow" loved the last stanza...very cool originality. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
cool poem and the title fits well, its all in the numbers , or words i should say, all in the letters ah haaa .. anyway good write ~wolfman |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"his kiss arrived gift wrapped in salty drops that fell on her tongue bitter-sweet and slow tomorrow more storms due..." Absolutely beautiful Tier. Hugs. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TiersdinSIS~ I'm so pleased this came back around ... delicately lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow -- one earth-tremor of a poem here....I'm glad I didn't miss it -- Thanks AJ, for bringin' this back! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tiersdin....What a pleasing poem!! |
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