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Open Poetry #36

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romaro11
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since 2005-11-19

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0 posted 2005-11-19 11:44 PM

zuruzuru

scratching scratching scratching
out lines and letters
with a pen
a touch too dull, and lacking
the polish to tighten up pupils.
ever off its mark.
but scratching in that black
ink, so much mine,
nonetheless.
more suited to be published
as the scribblings
of some stupid child;
on their parents wall, than
in the form of its aim.
that laughable aim, of all things,
as that of all things; the white worldly canvas.
laminated, of course,
against those very same
stupid worldly children,
with a glossy indifference.

so very few ever seem to realize. stabbing
rather than scratching,
better leaves its mark.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-11-20 08:55 AM

Romaro~
Welcome to our poetic circle~

I enjoyed the struggle of the ink in this one~
Hope to see more~
Read lots ... for there are some mighty fine poets here joining you in the word-circle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.