Open Poetry #36 |
Shosha |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
My mother’s slender Dark eyed teacher Between two soldiers On a cart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
AAUGH! Who needs pictures, when you've got words like these! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I agree... your words sear my mind with vivid image... a photograph would be redundant! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, agreeing with the above...this pierced the senses for me...well done John! |
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