L.I.F.E.S (Love It For Every Second)

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Open Poetry #36

L.I.F.E.S (Love It For Every Second)

poe
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since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

0 posted 2005-08-16 02:07 AM

A young child playing aimlessly
While you are filled with jealousy
Put it all in perspective
The way we are living is defective
Creating pain in the search for joy
Life is meant for you to enjoy
Judging eachother before we meet
Then we wonder why are souls are incomplete
Breath deep you are alive
You are not meant to simply survive
If there is pain find the source
And from it you must divorce
Smile tomorrow is another day
The beauty of the world is on display
For the neh sayers put down your hate
Let another eat off your plate
It takes a second to garner a friend
But a rift it takes a millenium to mend
We all have love inside
This little feeling is worldwide
We are all the same
There is no need for blame
Help someone tomorrow even the smallest way
With them this simple gift will stay
We all have the right to a life
With out strife

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-08-16 02:16 AM

My favorite lines:
"Smile tomorrow is another day
The beauty of the world is on display"
So simple, but so holds the truth in a nutshell. Really liked this, Poe.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-08-16 06:04 AM

wonderful write

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-08-16 11:10 AM

brillaint in many ways, may the light of this shine brightly on everyone who reads, and reaches those that don't.

Thank you

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