Open Poetry #36 |
Silence Must Have Reasons |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Silence Must Have Reasons Was I that distant memory You have decided to erase Discarded and wiped away Much like a passing phase Had I become the chapters Placed on forgotten pages Have I been put in the past As another of those stages Had it brought you pleasure Severing every heart thread Have I just been obliterated As you continued on ahead Had I meant nothing to you Over nine years of seasons Had you been planning this Silence must have reasons HopeĀ©2005 Link with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_766675.html |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
The problem with silence is that it leaves so many unanswered questions...My heart goes out to you, Hope...I pray you will have an end to the silence and you heart be whole again...*big big hugs* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tugs at the heartstrings this does Hope. Very well written piece. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
silence is a thing which to me is cruel...but then, perhaps this is the only way this person knows how to handle it... a thought provoking poem, sad, but questions so much... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Karen , yes silence does leave me wondering what could be wrong , but I shall try to keep strong Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Chris for your kind comment in reply , yes even through silence they somehow tugged my heartstrings Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Lee , only way they can handle it , yes Lee I am beginning to think the same thing Hope |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Written with perfection! I know this all too well.... "Had I meant nothing to you Over nine years of seasons Had you been planning this Silence must have reasons" |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Indeed...a good and inspiring write. Thank you for this, Hope. |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
The pain in your words jumps out and me and touches me. Silence can be deafning. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I know |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
HopeS...Silence can be a terrible thing. People should at least say something even if it's goodbye, then at least we know. Stay strong. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Silence is maddening! It roars, actually, yes. .....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Silence can also be another form of control, that way, this person can reserface in your life anytime...and so, only you know dear heart...listen to that wonderful voice in your heart...it loves you. |
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