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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-08-12 08:15 AM

behind the window's eyes
with only the indigo mind
of a moonwalkers eve

I could imagine your esteem
in dream catcher's clothing
with silken thread metallics

piercing the vanilla sleeves
of your admonished procrastination

and you teething your lips after
panting with the feasts of famish
on whispers less intentions

like the epicurean butterfly
feeding on plum plumed dragons
to erect their agonies

and to satiate your swooning
with swallow milked habituations

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-08-12 08:27 AM

One has to appreciate
how your butterflies
swarm...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-08-12 09:09 AM

butterflys are beautiful, elusive,
and sometimes hard to catch.
You capture well...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-08-12 09:27 AM

yes my dark friend you can surely
catch what ever you want with your words. sweet, smooth , tempting , and with some comfort. but some things are not meant to be caught or hunted or enticed for entrapment. i like the way you word your thoughts and views you give good visuals and warmth where one needs it. or just a reminder that it is ok to feel and express ones self. without fear of all looking down on as way life was. this past year i have opened up and learned to express and get it out just be me without fear of mental anguish of saveing ones own ass. i got a long way to go to get myself back, and each day i realize that more. the damage was deeper than i ever imagined or accepted i am trying to get help and get it all out and i am gratefull for you. sense i opened up more memories come flooding and then the know of what is still happening and it fills me with heavy sorrow and fear.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-08-12 09:40 AM

See the good you do
with your poetry, m'friend?

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2005-08-12 09:44 AM

The dream becomes reality with words that bring the vision to life...you capture the elusive butterfly beautifully...*big hugs*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-08-12 10:09 AM

humble thanks to each of you..
___________
ms sunshine, always you bring that to my pennings..
___________

ms gs, a butterfly reflects in your eyes
thank you lady

__________
ms groves, your new wings are lovely
let the sun know them often..let them feel
the winds of change..thank you lady friend

__________
startime, you smile me with the favor of your review, thank you

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2005-08-12 10:59 AM

behind the window's eyes
with only the indigo mind
of a moonwalkers eve

I could imagine your esteem
in dream catcher's clothing
with silken thread metallics

piercing the vanilla sleeves
of your admonished procrastination
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

oh that indigo mind of yours. *S*
you are good.... reeeaal good.
smooooooth as you are coooool

like the epicurean butterfly

yep..you rock.

I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out ...
But I want you to remember my name

Alanis

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-08-12 11:22 AM

a happy tree friend, donating words in warmth
free expressive feelings, which come and go and change with time...effortless like a butterfly when it lands on a flower...

terrific

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

9 posted 2005-08-12 01:50 PM

nectar-filled word blooms
bend, sway in poetry fields
a butterfly rests.

Once again, sensei, I listen and learn.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2005-08-12 02:36 PM

jm, you smile me lady flower, thank you for the eyes..

____________

ms Lee J you reply with the other side of my thoughts, thank you ms

___________

ms indi, doka of whispers, your eyes are pale silk knotted perfect as my wrist words
thank you

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2005-08-12 03:26 PM

come inside my chrysalis
and rescue me, heartwings open
ready to receive you

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2005-08-12 03:58 PM

ms inky..
let my mind be the water
that enters your welcoming cove
then hardens to heated ice
thank you ms

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