Water's Song ...duet with DARK ANGEL

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inkedgoddess
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Ohio

0 posted 2005-08-04 08:01 PM

Earth-bound
i am a shadow among the trees
among the wild and the honey bees
on the edge of this land
which does not move, as the sea
in her swarming

i am thirsty
and i have worn the skin of trees
in their kingdom
there, they have embraced me
and i am rested

but now

i fall to knees
uneasy
and in the dawn of apocalypse
i plead for respite
to be united once more
as one
with the fishes
the merriment of sailors
and
the water's song
that lulled me to dream
while these earthy chains
had seized me,

oh blue heaven
my globus home, how i ache
for the deep serenity with in
your surging madness.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-08-04 08:05 PM

inkedgoddess
Enjoyed and a delight to read.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2005-08-04 10:43 PM

wooohooooo!
I am keepin this

Martie

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3 posted 2005-08-04 10:49 PM

Great duet, ladies!!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-08-04 10:52 PM

Beautiful duet from two of Passion's finest!
Very much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs to you both, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-08-04 11:33 PM

Oh, now this is what needed to happen.

Truly, the sea meeting the shore.

Beautiful my fine friends, I am so happy to see this

*smiling*

It is pure beauty. Like the both of you.

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-08-05 05:46 AM

Thank you everyone! Michele's such a delight to work with.

and thank YOU Michele for this amazing opportunity to write with you, I can't express enough how honoured I am.

Lets duet again sometime yes?

We knew what we wanted and it just fell into place.

Thank you again.

Mareexx

~i want for myself your trembling~

she'll_be_apples
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since 2005-07-11

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7 posted 2005-08-05 04:38 PM

"and i have worn the skin of trees"

What a great line, enjoyed the poem too.

~peace~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2005-08-06 12:54 PM

Enjoyed...James

bklynboy
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florida

9 posted 2005-08-06 07:30 AM

easy read

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2005-08-06 04:36 PM

vandana

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11 posted 2005-08-07 10:56 AM

good read

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2005-08-08 01:36 AM

When I saw both of your names on a poem, I knew I was in for a treat....but I had no idea what a treat it would be. This is absolutely flawless -- and seamless.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2005-08-08 07:27 AM

such images you two conjur

my mind is still there
kinda..(grin)

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

14 posted 2005-08-08 08:18 AM

thanks for riding the waves with us...
and maree.......el gusto es mio

was a joy for me to work with you too

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2005-08-08 08:43 AM

brava ladies, wonderful dueting .

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

16 posted 2005-08-12 09:54 AM

Catching up (work is draining me..)

and ever so glad I am because this is tangible beauty.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

17 posted 2005-08-12 09:58 AM

BRAVO!!! A magnificent duet that sings a vision to life perfectly...I was lost in the vision you two wove....I hope you do it again...It is simply magical...*big hugs* to you both...

choshi
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18 posted 2005-08-12 10:40 AM

Beautiful Powerful full of passion ....>~P

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

19 posted 2005-08-12 12:00 PM

i am thirsty
and i have worn the skin of trees
in their kingdom
there, they have embraced me
and i am rested

but now

i fall to knees
uneasy
and in the dawn of apocalypse
i plead for respite

~*~

Seamless!
A most lovely veil...

thank you both for
your pairing of talent!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

20 posted 2005-08-12 12:22 PM

this gives meaning to whole other dimensions...dream on pretty one

Mysteria

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British Columbia, Canada

21 posted 2005-08-12 01:12 PM

Now this is a keeper!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

22 posted 2005-08-12 02:54 PM

thanks again guys and dolls for your look in

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