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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Listening I listened to some music play The sound I heard seemed far away Echoed in a distant hallow Nectar that I could not swallow I tried to walk a closer bide The lovely tones of it’s confide Bent my head to catch its spread But no more sound would touch my head Sorrow caused my heart to sigh Some beauties now would pass me by There was a time things seemed to blare And youth in me seemed not to care But added weight upon the scale Has turned my thoughts to wail the fail And I’m more conscious of the loss The feel and weal of natures force And softer is my footstep tread As acid eats away my thread |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ It's the rain ... got ya' in a funk ! Ya' me too~ May the soft chords of sunshine light your day ... and spread across the golf course fairway Then perhaps the listening ... will be a hole below par for thee~  Cheer up sweets~ We wub you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you sweety but even my hearing aids don't work too good lately. LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Yeah ... well ... this rain has got to affect everything, ya' know~  Isobel can just ask Santa to bring you some new ones~May all your days be Merry~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Get new batteries, Sy... and sending Warm Christmas hugs to keep you high! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you dear.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You don't need to hear this with your ears Seymour....feel it in your heart... You're wonderful !!! hugs, Chris  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Just for you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey how about me? I think you're darn terrific.. may I have a kiss on cheek too? Love ya Sy...  Nancy. ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, YOu can have two. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When I saw the title, I thought of an evening spent listening to you talk... and how precious those memories are. *S* I like this melancholy write very much, my friend. *S* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hello Sir Sy....even if ya can't hear, ya can read well....and your writing is superb! Ahoy Matey....land is close aboard. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you for the resurrection. Barry, Thanks pal for the read and comment. |
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Jeep Monkey Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 96Chaos |
Ohhhhh...man. Aging? I'm reminded of Jimmy Buffet here - I'm growing older, not up. Something like that. I seem a bit heavier in my tread But thoughts of me stuck in my head Tell me I'm youthful - still unchanged - 'Til my reflection shows up again. I like reading your stuff - musical - insightful - humor brought to daily life. Thank you! Jeep Monkey |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeep Monkey Thanks for the read enjoyed your comment. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww! Here's a  for you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Shalom, and beginning tonight look within and listen for yet another miracle m'friends, for you are not aging but only perfecting. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, my pal, I'm understanding this more and more every year. "They" say we're not getting older, just better.... but it sure feels like I'm getting older. LOL Loved your poem as I always do, dear Sir Poet. Can I have a kiss on the cheek, too? Here's you a few.....  Heart Hugs, Ethel  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thanks for the hug here is a back.Sharon, Now that is sweet.  Ethel, You shur can |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Know what you mean, Sy, my hearing isn't as good as it used to be. But there is this other music -- the song of your soul -- and that, I believe you hear perfectly! Happy New Year! ....jo |
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