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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-12-25 09:54 AM


If Only

There is a place I’d like to be
The high point of a fantasy
Within a breeze of moving air
Not here or there but everywhere.

An essence casting in a groove
Through the flower and leaves that move
Quintessence in a sky of blue
Like the magic of the dew

Vapors of a moving veil
Sailing on a sail less sail
Touching with a touch less touch
The trivia of much and such

In other words a God to be
With all the true of mystery
Giving taking, building dreams
Making nonsense of extremes

Now wouldn’t that a dainty wish
To place upon a dreamers dish



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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-12-25 10:04 AM


Yes, Sy

Happy Holidays to you and Isabel

M

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-12-25 10:13 AM


Giving taking, building dreams
Making nonsense of extremes

Now wouldn’t that a dainty wish
To place upon a dreamers dish

~*~

Positutely, our Sy!
The best of the season
to you and Isabel!



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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-12-25 10:30 AM


Maureen,
And the happiest of Holliday to you.

Sunshine
Thank you sweet and a happy year to you.

inot2B
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4 posted 2005-12-25 11:35 AM


Just being able to read your words, fulfills my wish.

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year
to you and yours.

Bodger
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5 posted 2005-12-25 11:48 AM


Excellent words

Dave

Nan
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6 posted 2005-12-25 09:11 PM


Happy Holidays, Sweet Sy & Isabel...
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7 posted 2005-12-25 10:07 PM


You manage to brew a new stew every morn or
nite to entertain our brain cells and give
us the poetic fire that presses our quills
into action....Si Senor, es muy bueno!!

Balladeer
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8 posted 2005-12-25 10:11 PM


Sy, your dreamer's dish is never empty...and may it never be. Happy Chanukah, my friend...
aujussy wolf
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9 posted 2005-12-25 10:19 PM


Quintessence in a sky of blue

: ) that line is worth more than gold
seymour , need i say more lol
peace this new year to you and to all
~wolfy

iliana
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10 posted 2005-12-31 12:38 PM


Dainty?  Indeed!!  lol!  Someday, Sy, someday.  Beautiful poem.   ....jo
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