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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Our horses Are prancing Today at least We ride the road Like champions Returning to their home Hear, the monks are singing Bells are ringing People cheering in the square The sun smiles Leaves rustle O my friends In truth there is so little That is beautiful For very long Laughing Our horses Are prancing Skies are blue For now the world is good |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow I like this. Good job. I like your stuff. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
O my friends In truth there is so little That is beautiful For very long perhaps a reminder, when things are this good, to welcome the miracle of it...which makes the bad, last less... Lovely writing |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Beautiful write. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
top ten. I love the mood. |
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