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Open Poetry #35

Mir Ist So Wunderbar

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-03-11 07:40 PM

we still are

hidden
in the night

in secret
special places
meeting
sadness
briefly stayed

what words we use
are not heard—
above understanding
the autumn moon

with dawn’s soft light
we go again

back to no return

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-03-11 08:25 PM

cool write

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2005-03-11 11:43 PM

I like this.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2005-03-12 07:14 AM

Enjoyed

Andrew

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2005-03-12 12:55 PM

I like this.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-03-14 07:03 PM

Enjoyed...James

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-01 01:32 PM

war.

"with dawn’s soft light
we go again

back to no return"

some of your peoms, like peacock, are with a heavy and singnificant tail that makes a whole thing more attractive and a beauty and an extraodiary and it flashes back more light to already beautiful body and head.

try to find mor and better words next time.

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