How Chaste And Lovely Thou Dost Appear Dear

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Open Poetry #35

How Chaste And Lovely Thou Dost Appear Dear

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-03-13 09:42 PM

How Chaste And Lovely Thou Dost Appear Dear

Aye dreams are not more than, “Wish it had been,”
But still ‘tis sweet to envisage thy kiss,
For hope isn’t an avowal of sin,
It’s the longing for that, which would bring bliss.

Be delirious wrapped in my dreams love,
Betroth thy ghostly lips to wanton thirst,
For unbridled passion falls not short of,
These ballads for thee so ever well versed.

How chaste and lovely thou dost appear dear,
In lace I’d have thee beneath chiffon sheets,
Thy need undressed ere the celestial sphere,
Called forth the daystar o’er fantasies sweets.

When dreams yield warmth wake the romanticist not,
For with yearning and need the deceptions were bought.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2005-03-13 11:27 PM

Kevin,
Sweet and senual are the words you write.
Your words are beautiful.
I love this piece as well as all your poetry.
I'll same the rest of the comment for later. ;-)

Hugs

Amour Vous

Within this heart you'll find love

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-03-18 06:46 AM

Thank you dear friend. I am glad you liked the poem.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-18 08:00 PM

always well done

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2005-03-19 10:18 AM

Kevin - I always look forward to losing myself in the old world feel and romantic longing of your work - it's like being lost for a moment in a lovely dream play -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-03-20 09:06 AM

To be lost in a dream such as this portends the gathering of premonition...
These words fell upon my mind as silk Kevin.
TD

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2005-03-20 09:47 AM

Kev,

I have no doubt that you enjoy writings of
this genre...almost as much as we enjoy the
reading of same.

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