Wo'Hidden'rds, the truth is Li'Hidden'es

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Open Poetry #35

Wo'Hidden'rds, the truth is Li'Hidden'es

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-03-11 11:41 PM

Another brain teaser.

"Wo'Hidden'rds, the truth is Li'Hidden'es"

Silence is the rain
Falling on the window pane

And stillness is merely blades of grass
that flicker when the winds pass

Brocken is the Picture frame
untouched by the cracked glass
inside the shame

And you my friend cannot know
unless you see such so.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (03-12-2005 12:52 PM).]

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2005-03-12 07:34 AM

Enjoyed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-03-12 09:47 PM

Not sure if I got this, but I thought "rock" might hold the glass.
An interesting write when the words and the lies are hidden.
Well done.
TD

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-03-12 10:05 PM

Um no... I will give you a hint though, The title hints at the message of the poem. The way I titled the poem has nothing to do with the poem, only the message of the title.

Juju

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