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0 posted 2005-03-11 12:24 PM


OK, see what you make of this......


Eyes closed tight, barely above a whisper,"I have to do this. They all think I'm so weak, and can't take it."

Leaning back in the chair,"I dunno Homes, this ain't somethin to rush into man,'sides, how's this gonna prove anything anyway?"

Arms folded tight, eyes easing open,"It will make a statement, one not soon forgotten."

"Yo, it ain't no thang to me man, you're the one's gotta live with it,,not me."

"That's right."

"OK man,,,here goes."

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1 posted 2005-03-11 12:30 PM


I hope it said, "Mother?"  
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2 posted 2005-03-11 06:04 PM


Yup,,,,thanks for your reply, I knew I posted this in the wrong forum,,,sigh

No one really cares,,why should I?

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3 posted 2005-03-12 12:57 PM


I like how both people spoke so differently from one another.  I find that difficult.


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4 posted 2005-03-12 07:01 PM


Thank you copperbell,,,I'm forever doing voices and such,,,,and to talk at me in person, well, ya'd soon see my lingadee is a wee bit off the norm,,,lol

No one really cares,,why should I?

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