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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts 
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*what's up guys i wrote this for my girlfriend at the time on valentines day. I found you like a treasure cast away by one who knew not it's value so like a treasure i shall keep you the one i never want to lose the one who cast light on my heart like drapes opened on a dark room the warmth you give me is comfort i don't wan to live without the road ahead is hazy and dark i don't know what lies around each bend but with you i have the confidence to face tomorrow without fear you are the air in my lungs sustaining me with even the smallest gasp to have you lying next to me is a dream i hope to never wake from thanks to you my heart is free for the first time in years the dark seems lifted and i can see the sun |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 oh my  very touching My spirit will rise |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Romantic.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your heart shines in this - touching Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
thank you. unfortunately she broke up with me about 2 weeks later. Which prompted me to write "dead love". |
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