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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-15 07:23 AM

there is a hollow in the sky
a keyhole hidden
by the hands of man
when he was born
and his innocent
was cut and tied

sometimes lovers find the key
on some hand hold beach
where their bare feet
walk in the evening
and their eyes see the sun
playing with reflections

they smile and make promises
to someday find
the heaven place hollow
where their gift will open
a doorway to the god room
so they can taste the fruit

of that special tree of eden

_____________

dark

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-02-15 07:28 AM

very lovely D,

I watch for that someday

M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2005-02-15 09:10 AM

some days dark baby, it's only a mindflight, but one that is sweeter than a closed sky, and then there are days when it pours
and i'll have one of those thank you

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-02-15 10:17 AM

sensually romantic - lovingly beautiful - a word place eden - love this D-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-02-15 10:28 AM

ms MMMs thank you lady frind

____________________

ms inky, you have a lovely way'
of being you, thank you

________________

Suzz, a bit of quiet place
for our gentle noise
care to dance?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-02-15 12:47 PM

loving is like that, and you've given it a whole new meaning...tender, spiritual...and very much alive

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-02-15 01:47 PM

....nice

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2005-02-16 07:51 AM

sometimes lovers find the key
on some hand hold beach
where their bare feet
walk in the evening
and their eyes see the sun
playing with reflections''''

~

what a lovely image for the sun to wittness...

~~*~~
the wind sings with the calm
tranquilize in the night
sien beauty on my lips
~~**~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-02-16 12:52 PM

there is a hollow in the sky
a keyhole hidden

I knew I had a photo
of your hollow in the sky

'atta boy!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2005-02-16 04:53 PM

DS

I love it when you write this way...so sensitive, that it almost hurts to read.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-02-17 12:34 PM

a little on the light side for you
dark one~
romantic whispers
softly caress
ones heart~

sunshine- i was sent a pic of a sunset at jamaca and on the left side, i called it an angel, and your pic has same in it. wow

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2005-02-17 10:22 AM

sometimes lovers find the key
on some hand hold beach
where their bare feet
walk in the evening
and their eyes see the sun
playing with reflections

How beautiful! *S* They do indeed... only so many learn later it slipped out a hole in their pocket long before they reached their destination. *S* Great write! *S*

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