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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my hands are the man of wind touch sighs and you are tomorrow as a carmine rouge with rose petal whispers by window's wall reflecting diaphanous fragility perhaps in mirrors of warm water dancing for eyelids fills of river sighs and gentle the fit of ends into the soft safe surround cupping nurtured blends comfort and desire entwined warmed by the kissing mouth with the sides of a smile's cerise _______________ dark (series: sooth) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and you do so sooth very elegantly this morning sir...a welcomed read, beyond any explaination of words...were you reading my mind...again? Smiles and hugs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j..perhaps just listening..thanks lady friend |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you are the velvet soothe after the poor rose has been plucked raw  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my hands are the man of wind touch sighs and you are tomorrow as a carmine rouge with rose petal whispers by window's wall reflecting diaphanous fragility perhaps in mirrors of warm water dancing for eyelids fills of river sighs ================================== those verses are poetic gold poet sir.... such superb imagery and personify...love the vocab and allit word play, and what an opening hook.... smooth and soothe..poet groove.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky.. let me lotion your notions with gentle thanks lady friend _____________ ms janet, you mothy me softly and I blush at the wings of your butterfly thank you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D - such soft beauty and warm wrap of soul this morning - may I cuddle in to your words?  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
soothsin..they are my arms wear them gentle enjoy the warm claim them as your whisper place thanks hon |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
by window's wall reflecting diaphanous fragility perhaps in mirrors of warm water dancing for eyelids fills of river sighs ~*~ smoothly soothing, indeed... a calming, sensuous poem, this... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
A series of soothe it's what you do best, D. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine thank you for the visit hope you feel the feathers here _____________ ms indi, you do well at making the sooth ooze lady thank you for your velvet |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You wrap phrases around words with skill. Joyce |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
soothing whispers~ touch one's soul~ ` |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
soothe, indeed.... tender spill....so much enjoyed this~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
no one, and I mean no one does smooth sooth quit the way you do babe. Sleepy morning hugs to you. |
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