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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-02-15 01:12 AM

A fog horn sounds
in the clouded distance.

A faint,
white, mist
passes in front
of green trees.

The sky is gray.

There is
a silence
on the surface
of the sea.

At times like these, one might believe
there could appear on the quiet shore:

the happy dog you used to have,
a friend
whose end was long ago,

that true love,

a young girl
with long hair

collecting colored stones.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-02-15 04:08 AM

oh how I love to read you

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2005-02-15 11:15 PM

I do too -- it's that good, isn't it? In Huan Yi we have a poet of true quality.

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2005-02-16 12:36 PM

With your words... I am there. *S*

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

4 posted 2005-03-01 01:49 AM

You said this so beautifully and expressed thoughts so difficult to capture. I have looked at places where my lost ones have been, and remembered how they were in that place.

Your poetry is great reading.
Shenachie

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-03-01 12:13 PM

extremely precious

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2005-03-01 02:51 PM

"At times like these, one might believe..."

You painted the scene so well, visualizing becomes second nature.

enjoyed,
miscellanea

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2005-03-01 03:00 PM

A great read. Enjoyed!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-03-01 03:08 PM

Enjoyed this Huan, felt like I was there.

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

9 posted 2007-05-01 02:14 PM

I just read Tow Rives. here comes three rivers.
are you going to count up or count down?

all beautiful.

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