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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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Before dawn we have come to fish the depths for salmon By the glow of a carried lantern we find our way along the shore Wearing old clothes against the cold we appear a couple of many years The sun’s first pink light reflects on silent water I watch my woman— cast her line into the sea |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How lovely it is to see the reflection of this in your words....thank you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A beautiful scene. And though you appear a couple "of many years", there is the pleasure to watch her ... Love, Margherita  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Feel like I'm watching a silent movie. You're good at pulling out the pictures. ....jo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh here it is! I saw this a couple of days ago but something took me away from the forums and I couldn't respond. I still think the same: It's a beautiful thing to say and a beautiful way to say it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Such a lovely word painting to ponder. You said so much so gently. Like the gentleness and kindness expressed here, the enduring face of love. Shenachie |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gave the reader comfort and hope, in knowing there most certainly is fidelity expressed to the thoughts of relationships...wonderful read |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
oops, she caught you. |
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