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Forever and a Day
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Forever and a Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I am, she is, we are today sharing a body, a mind but different needs all of which are never met. I am, she is, we are in wonder why the days filled with lonely are lost to the moments when... Fate takes over, "meant to be" s are not and so the "unless"es play the odds the outcome, always a loss... always a loss because courage to be, courage to say, courage to stand for stays in the shadows, and leaves one (I, she, we) walking the path alone. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fine bold and strong poem M...thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I see, I ... she ... we ... walking the pages of blue~ Good morning to all ... and to the one who dips the ink, a special :hug: *Huglets* my friend~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, With multiple she's you get multiple see's Enjoyed |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome, strong write  My spirit will rise |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
more like multiple feelings escaping... only way to keep sane  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Understood! The heart can only take so much. Warm hugs, Maureen~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I should try that |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanking you for the time shared~~ hugs M |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
Just reading back and the title caught my eye, so I read and enjoyed the words beneath the title. Now lets give others a second look see. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the body mind and soul, strolling in the fast lane, wonderfully rich and hearty right. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
the three of you make such a lovely trio... I can see why they'd want to spend time with you.. |
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