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Some Romantic Evening
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Some Romantic Evening |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some Romantic Evening It was late, on an evening in the land of paradise and I could never make up this story so the truth will suffice. The candles were lit and flickering bright and romantic music caressed the passion of the night. Trade winds were blowing at least twenty five, they blew the candles out just as I closed my eyes. And thats when she placed her first kiss upon my wanton lips. I smelled the scent of her perfume, I swallowed the dew of her kiss, never taking my mouth off of her tasty lips, I struggled for the air that I breathe in moments of bliss. JamesLee Feb13 2005 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very nice, JamesLee! Happy Valentine's Day.  ....jo |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Passion, sweet passion James Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
love it~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you for the lovely peek into "the land of paradise"! Love, Margherita  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
a passionate penning- Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James |
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