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Open Poetry #35

Some Romantic Evening

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-02-14 05:35 PM

Some Romantic Evening

It was late, on an evening
in the land of paradise and I
could never make up this story
so the truth will suffice.
The candles were lit and flickering
bright and romantic music caressed
the passion of the night.

Trade winds were blowing
at least twenty five, they
blew the candles out just
as I closed my eyes.
And thats when she placed
her first kiss upon
my wanton lips.

I smelled the scent of
her perfume, I swallowed
the dew of her kiss,
never taking my mouth
off of her tasty lips,
I struggled for the air
that I breathe in
moments of bliss.

JamesLee
Feb13
2005

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-02-14 05:54 PM

Very nice, JamesLee! Happy Valentine's Day.

....jo

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-02-14 07:05 PM

Passion, sweet passion James

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2005-02-16 01:54 PM

love it!

MGROVES

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california

4 posted 2005-02-17 12:59 PM

love it~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

5 posted 2005-02-19 04:05 PM

Thank you for the lovely peek into "the land of paradise"!

Love, Margherita

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-02-19 06:33 PM

Very nice write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2005-02-19 11:17 PM

a passionate penning-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-08-05 08:07 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James

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