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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 2005-03-01 07:54 AM

we have distances to undo
i don’t know how or when:
not with words, no
not with silences

perhaps with blades of grass
or the fall of leaves
or maybe
a water-song

i don’t know

if we could only put ourselves
one into another
to play the midst of waves
to live suddenly
like a hunger spun-out

face to face in “rainy” moments

i wait for autumn
and the invasion of dreams
to fall on me
on us

perhaps then
i’ll bring you happy flowers

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-03-01 08:03 AM

i wait for autumn
and the invasion of dreams
to fall on me
on us

perhaps then
i’ll bring you happy flowers
Damn Maree, this made me smile.
So good to see your words again

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-03-01 08:42 AM

this hits so close to home for me...
really

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-03-01 08:44 AM

Ok, so you take a few days off
and find a better way to write...

Hmmmm....

just what did your muse say to you
anyway?

This, dear, is a

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-03-01 08:55 AM

"one into another
to play the midst of waves
to live suddenly
like a hunger spun-out"

yes...that would be the way to do it.

great stuff.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2005-03-01 09:00 AM

beautiful Maree, I hope for this myself.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-03-01 11:36 AM

Maree....happy flowers..yes!!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-03-01 03:35 PM

happy flowers
bloom on the tears of clouds
wither on the withdrawal of the sea

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2005-03-01 09:30 PM

we have distances to undo
i don’t know how or when:
not with words, no
not with silences

Love that verse, it could stand alone but I'm glad it didn't.
This was a sheer delight to read, Maree~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738