Open Poetry #35 |
less than I am to you |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
less than I am to you to care with the sensitivity, a whisper on a breeze tapping the shoulder of knowledge evaporating a tear that graces a face hidden emotions singing the last of while the rain washes away the footprints only a remnant of a yesterday's dream yielding no more... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Good morning sweety. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning Sy...it's finally raining here... my kind of day M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's about to storm here and this fits my mood now |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Good write M... Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I mean this in the nicest possible way but watching Blazing Saddles last night when a cowboy spoke of the quality of the words made me think of you In short words you seem to encapture a certain magic. Excellent words are written here but the flow doesn't in a lot of cases happen It is almost like a pre-judged audience and I will, no doubt pay for this comment but life is there and it often seems to be missing from the words I read Your words are vibrant, they encapsulate and deliver Dave |
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