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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-30 09:07 AM



less than I am to you

to care with the sensitivity,
a whisper on a breeze
tapping the shoulder of knowledge
evaporating a tear that graces a face
hidden emotions singing the last of
while the rain washes away the footprints
only a remnant of a yesterday's dream
yielding no more...

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2005 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-04-30 09:17 AM


Maureen,
Good morning sweety.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-04-30 09:19 AM


Good Morning Sy...it's finally raining here...
my kind of day


M

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-30 09:39 AM


it's about to storm here and this fits my mood now
Goldenrose
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4 posted 2005-04-30 10:10 AM


Good write M...


Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

DavePage
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5 posted 2005-04-30 04:48 PM


I mean this in the nicest possible way but watching Blazing Saddles last night when a cowboy spoke of the quality of the words made me think of you

In short words you seem to encapture a certain magic.

Excellent words are written here but the flow doesn't in a lot of cases happen

It is almost like a pre-judged audience and I will, no doubt pay for this comment but life is there and it often seems to be missing from the words I read

Your words are vibrant, they encapsulate and deliver

Dave

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