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I Wish It Would Rain
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I Wish It Would Rain |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I Wish It Would Rain I feel the emptiness returning, acceptance to replace the throbbing that too much thinking (and the weather) produces at the temples. There are no promises to be kept or made and the silence is sometimes more soothing than words. I see double this morning, the past and the past, both side by side, a widescreen view, a path already taken leading to now, where abandonment feels natural. I miss my reasons for living, those taken too often for granted, never having had to think because each morning offered the lessons of another day. Each morning, the day before was behind you and tomorrow always looked promising. How I wish it would just rain... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah honey...  believe me, it's raining here... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wish it would rain here too M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hugs and well wishes...thank you for a tender moment of sharing... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well done M! the rain will come and it will cleanse the unease of the blurred vision....  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sweetie days like this are the kind of days I love to grab my jacket and take a walk in the rain. Its raining here, come... join me....we will walk together. HUGS |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A cleansing rain is always a blessing... We had our share this week, but the sun's out now. I'll send it your way...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I do like your writing It is so natural and so good Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dave...I happened to have had a somewhat(if that is possible) migraine yesterday when I awoke...making me thoroughly ill... and all I wanted was the rains to come to get the pressure off my body  and today...well it's raining and I am just sulking because I still can't function well Thank you again M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your headache has produced a passionate write, dear Maureen, even though melancholic. Love, Margherita |
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