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One Thousand Days
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One Thousand Days |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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One thousand days since last we met upon my golden hill of dreams one thousand nights have passed, and yet ten thousand more to me it seems. One thousand early morning cups my coffee grows cold as I wait for something more, a sign from him that tells me it is not too late. He loves me and he loves me not a schizophrenic kind of love a man so warm, with heart of ice no telling what his soul's made of. One thousand nights of missing him and yearning for him, far away we once were closer than the rest but nothing in his heart would stay. One thousand days of bitter tears blended in tandem with his lies one thousand days to lose a dream and nothing left to do but die. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey you: ...or there's always "A Thousand-And-One Nights" to pass the time. Perhaps there is some solice in the faith that in the next life things will be better on the next go-round...  to you.-MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra!! Oooh so good to see you!! You have been missed.. and I love this piece. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sandra...When i saw your name I couldn't wait too read this since you are one of my favorite poets. Chilling tender write enjoyed very much. Welcome back...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cat~ It is really nice to see you here~ The penning is sadly melancholic ... but even if the dream has died ... you are very much alive to dream again~ And as Cinderella sang, "A dream is a wish your heart makes."  Have a beautiful, safe and Happy 4th~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Lord Cat, it is so good to see you here again. You have not lost your talent dear lady. This is so poignant and something I can so identify with... but this is such a showing of your beautiful heart. Thank you for visiting hon, hope all is well with you. I'd rather be alone, than hurt this way. JoDee |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, it's quite apparent there's a contingent of poets who have missed your pennings... welcome home, Cat. As one of my favorite poets says... "you've come to a safe landing..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, you all have made my day, with your kind words. They have been sadly lacking. Thanks. Sandra |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sad and aching....  good to see you here....I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh such pain and longing...the strength lies behind, i feel how it aches to come forth. It's great to read you again Sandra... Welcome back, it's so good to see you Maree  drove me like a magnet |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I am pleased to know your old is found new your heart is true your tears have been kissed and that you know ... ...YOU HAVE BEEN MISSED!!!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hey there Sandra, I am so glad to see you. I have missed reading your wonderful poems. Welcome back. I hope you stay. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you m'lady have been missed here! and if we all have a thousand days and nights to plead our case? please, stay...and share precious moments more often |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
One thousand early morning cups my coffee grows cold as I wait for something more, a sign from him that tells me it is not too late. oh how this hits home good to read you again you have been missed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"One thousand days of bitter tears blended in tandem with his lies one thousand days to lose a dream and nothing left to do but die" the rhythm of this is perfection. Loved it. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sandra....it is so good to see you! Your poems tender craft, so sad and so true with love. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sandra...very sad and feeling poem but yet, I think the 1000 days is significant, too. Perhaps, it's a 1000 days to get him out of your system, and my hope is something new will be born. ....jo |
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