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TWENTY OR LESS...#206 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#206 Copyright 2005 by: Mark V Sheldon out of time the sight shocks nerves crash loud changes strife and fire love ended tonight You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew...heavy metal...made me hurt |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OUCH!!! You always manage to put so much into these Mark. This one packs a punch. Excellent. Hugs~Nancy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
timeless the need togetherness a want changes from the unknown to known a beginning M |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so sad...but it does happen and you have taken that moment, and held it still... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, A word from the abyss. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerfully charged with emotions Mark. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
completed alone and incomplete lonely, dark place this the corner the dark corner of an end.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
LeeJ: Or perhaps... "full metal"...? Good morning, Nancy... I'm starting to appreciate the old wisdom of "less is more"... Thank you, as always. Maureen: I am most definitely enjoying your interpretations and outlooks. Thank you for sharing, and might I add: you are doing this style most admirably. SEA: I suppose we have all been there at some point in our lives in whatever capacity... Seymour: As has been said: "In the beginning there was darkness"... Scorpio: ...so long as you feel something... Thank you for your time. Susan: A very nice paraphrase. You too have captured the moment well, and I thank you for sharing... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey Mark, good to see you. Wow, you said it..Love ends, and it always feels so harsh when it does. Sandra |
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