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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-06-30 09:06 AM

These Eyes

It stretched out lazy before me
a sight I've viewed
a thousand times, or more

yet I could not descry
whether it was worlds away
or if it resides here
in my own back yard.

A dream it seemed
painted in living colors
of earth tones that blended
amber horizons into bluest skies,
causing brilliantine glimmer sighs,
that these eyes
had never quite seen before

for I was mesmerized
by shadows dancing
in shades of green
through spacious fields
where nature's glory
revealed to me
colors dancing in the wind
and I swear,
mother nature grinned...

Birds may sense by aerial view
grandeur of such calm hues,
that excite and light this inner core,
but does it make them tremble
all the more?

When daylight dims this sight I feel,
or age becomes a bane, and real,
know I have cast into memory's store
this sight I have never quite seen, before.

Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-06-30 09:14 AM

Oh my..what a beautiful blending of poetic voices!
The words and the picture..both perfect.
~Hugging you both for this keeper~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-06-30 09:16 AM

Birds may sense by aerial view
grandeur of such calm hues,
that excite and light this inner core,
but does it make them tremble
all the more?

I bet it does...this my dear lady, made me feel the connection...oh how beautiful this was...and much needed on my agenda...thank you

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2005-06-30 09:23 AM

wahoooo

and what a blending indeed.....

splendiferous ladies, absolutely splendiferous.

this is being placed ever gently into my library

Mxx

drove me like a magnet
to the sea

~stevie nicks~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-06-30 09:34 AM

"for I was mesmerized
by shadows dancing
in shades of green
through spacious fields
where nature's glory
revealed to me
colors dancing in the wind
and I swear,
mother nature grinned..."

beautiful blending you two!!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2005-06-30 09:34 AM

beautiful picture and blending of words.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-06-30 10:44 AM

I can not express how much I
enjoyed writing with Karilea again,
even if I did have to beg a bit.

*tappin my foot and shakin my finger*

Thank you all, and Kari?

"back when I believed in love
and would lay my heart on the line"
(T. Lawrence)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-06-30 01:39 PM

Well, at least my moody muse
listened to you!

She went back in hiding!

I think I'm taxing her too much
on the sequel...

that's what I think...

Thanks for the nudge, little one!

There are some lines in this particular piece
that seem to be clinging to me...

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2005-06-30 03:46 PM

A wonderful collaboration of creative energy. Well done both of you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2005-06-30 06:36 PM

two of my favorites! well done

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2005-07-01 11:02 AM

Scorpio, thanks for stopping in and leaving your thoughts.

  thank you Lady Lauren. Amazing what a little phone can take a picture of isn't it. And then, the picture kept saying..
'write'....lol..
and a duet was born.  Luv ya hon.

Momma K?  I am still smiling this morning at how beautiful you made this duet.

Give me your heart
Make it real
Or else forget about it...Santana

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2005-07-01 12:41 PM

wow!

It's about time you two got together! Well worth the wait.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2005-07-01 01:07 PM

A beautiful painting with words, Donna
and Karilea. Very pretty.
Hugs,

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2005-07-01 02:05 PM

Sweet spirit...thank you
for the nudge!

See you over in Forum #36!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2005-07-01 02:07 PM

How wonderfully you work together!!! *S*

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2005-07-01 02:10 PM

Karilea and Donna

Isn't it wonderful to know that the same can be newly beautiful in a new day with a different mood? This was such a gorgeous blending of the view.

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